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巴芒 发表于 2013-5-17 21:33

曾记否(一组)

[b]梨花[/b]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]曾以为你是白的[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]洁白的白[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]以为你是素的[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]素得像诗歌一样纯粹[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]后来发现你[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]被一堆蚂蚁抬起[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]头顶花翎到处乱跑[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]举着一树变异的梨花[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]片片海棠闻之枯萎[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]梨花和海棠[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]为何不能共存?[/font][/color][font=simsun][color=#494949]
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[b]站在黄河大桥上撒尿[/b]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]不服不行[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]一泡尿撒到现在[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]还不肯消停[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]欢快地撒着尿[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]作秀、吹牛、吵架[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]都是诗歌前进必走的过场[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]没事儿的[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]顶你个肺!那一天尿撒没了[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]还有口水,可以四处乱飞[/font][/color]

[b]黑色的城[/b]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]黑色的[/font][/color][font=simsun]眼睛[/font]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]不会让黑色更黑[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]黑色眼睛找到的光明[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]让一代人从黑色的世界从容脱身[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]光明可以是闪电,也可以是火焰[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]光明也因此而有不确定性[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]燃烧之后会随时重返黑暗之城[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]但无论怎样,举起斧头对准妻子、孩子和自己[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]都不会取得我的原谅[/font][/color]
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[b]曾记否[/b]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]前年和你喝酒[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]对你说[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]你最大的功劳是让大堆诗人[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]发现了自己的下半身[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]欣喜若狂赤裸裸地四处招摇[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]说是真性[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]你终于让很多诗人认识到[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]下半身光荣上半身可耻[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]原来下半身完全可以支配上半身[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]用上半身思考出来的东西[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]都是矫情[/font][/color]

[color=#494949][font=simsun]沉默良久[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]你说,这并非我的本意[/font][/color]
[color=#494949][font=simsun]
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蝶小妖 发表于 2013-5-18 21:53

意有所指,这也许就是诗歌的本真表达吧!诗人叙述的笔法冷静、敏锐,同时以不一样的视角,直指现象背后隐藏着的悲凉,它透过一些现象,一些厚重,来解析诗歌最终的实质。

郭应国 发表于 2013-5-26 11:16

质感,朴实的语言

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